O.K. so while these are probably my two favorite pages from this chapter, I can’t help but notice a fairly big error in the artwork. In these 2 pages, the moon is simultaneously in 3 places at once. Behind Ikaros’s head, behind Harpy’s head, and then in between the two of them. That’s a fairly big mistake to just not notice, but whatever, it’s only the moon.
As for the chapter it’s O.K., but I definitely think it could have been better. For example, I brought it up when I posted the RAW and I’m bringing it up now. Why do Angelroids constantly go near water? Up until this point, I thought it was only deep water that was a serious threat, but no! Now we know any Angelroid other than Ikaros can die just from being submerged in it. I could understand it when I thought they would be O.K. up until a couple hundred feet under, but now that I know they can die in the deep end of a swimming pool, I really have to question their logic here.